Inter - Universe Anime Group Chat
Closing Word
Closing Words and Next Plan
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Hello~
Author here~
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I know that this is not a really good novel. I mean, too many explanations that are actually unnecessary or should be stories can be made more concise and concise.
Take for example in the first CHAPTER, the world of Seiretsukai no Blade Dance (/\= Sword Dance of the Holy Spirit User). Just to make a story in the timeline that is not long, not for a month, this spends up to tens of CHAPTERS, dozens of thousands of words! That's too much, especially for readers who want to enjoy the flow, not the dialogues revolving between characters or explanations in the form of text that is too long.
Then, about counting points, the original skill that has a price point feels unfair. And honestly, I made the mistake of not recording all the prices in the system store. But after doing data collection, more or less this is the result.
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* Kaifuku Mahou-300;healing ability of the world [Black Clover], has a lot of potential.
* Elemental Waffe-500; The realization of weapons from the origin spirit [Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance].
* Cheon Bu's External Energy Control from the Three Skills-309; Ability to control Ki from [The Gamer].
* Henge no jutsu-500;Changing the appearance of the world [Naruto].
* Explosive Talisman-400; Ability to create explosion belongs to Entoma Vasilissa Zeta of [Overlord].
* Piercing Wind Talisman-150; The ability to make wind-piercing gusts belongs to Entoma Vasilissa Zeta of [Overlord].
* Sharp Cutting Talisman-150;Creating a sharp form of magic courtesy of Entoma Vasilissa Zeta of [Overlord].
* Lightning Bird Talisman-300; The amulet created a firebird belonging to Entoma Vasilissa Zeta from [Overlord].
* Strengthen Self Talisman-200;Firm self-proclaimed property of Entoma Vasilissa Zeta from [Overlord].
* Item-Growt Candy-200; Raise the level or power of [Epic Conquest].
* Item--Evolution Stone-300;Stone to evolve the companion of [Monster Clash 2].
* Item-Elemental Essence-150; An essence of an element that is part of the evolution item of [Monster Clash 2].
* Item-Elemental Gemma-150;Item to approximate Creo (companion) relationship with an element of [Evocreo].
* Toughening-500; Ability to increase the durability of an object, original of [Author Imagination].
* Shunshin no jutsu-1,900; ninja basic ability to teleport from [Naruto].
* Accel-500; Capability of [Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomoni], where increase the speed of the user.
* Homing Enchant-1,200; Moving projectiles from [Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja].
* Magic Manipulation-300;Increase magic control, from [Author Imagination].
* Enchant Magic (+2)-400;Ability that allows users to add skill effects to items from [Author Imagination].
* Ta Three-Dimensional Movement-500;Father Jio Inzaghi from [Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance] which makes moving at various angles easier.
* Kenbunshoku Haki-3,000;From [One Piece] which makes the user like having a sixth sense.
* Thought Acceleration-4,000;From [Kumo Desu ga? The nanika?] which accelerates one's thinking ability with an increase depending on which one is used.
* Parallel Mind (+1)-4,000;Like having extra personality from [Kumo Desu ga? Nanjing?].
* Shikigami no Mai-6,000;The manipulation of the body into paper belongs to Konan of [Naruto].
* Drawing-300; Imagination drawing technique from [Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomoni].
* Boost-600; Basic physical enhancement capabilities of [Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomoni].
* Fluoroscopy-1,450;Seeing Shiraori's 360 degrees from [Kumo Desuka? Nanika], however, is weakened to match the power of the user.
* Body Boost (Shintai Kyokka)-800; Basic physical enhancement capabilities of [Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja].
* Gap-Cleaver (Shuku-chi)-900; Approaching enemies quickly and quietly from [Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja]
* Magic Strike (Maryoku Geki)-700; Ayunan contains magic power from [Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja]
* Chakra Thread-1,000;Creating chakra threads from [Naruto].
* Stealth-800; The hiding ability belongs to Satou Kazuma of [Konosuba].
* Appraisal-1,100; Assessing the status of the opponent, although incomplete. From [Kumo Deuka? Nanjing?].
* Spider Threat-1,200;Creating spider threads from [Kumo Desuka? Nanjing?].
* Threat Control-1.100;Controlling yarn of [Kumo Desuka? Nanjing?].
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Long is not the list? There are approximately 36 lines.
That is still not data anytime there is a change in points for each member. Honestly, a change of points is the most difficult to remember. You could say it complicates yourself.
Then, the next error, is on the system screen design; on charging individual status. The plan and I think, in there will contain every skill, object, or other related to the system. In other words, if it is not system-related (such as characters creating their own skill variations) then it will not be incorporated into the system.
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Mah, the point is there are still many flaws in this novel and I myself am still trying to make that much better. Maybe I will make a continuation in another novel (sequel) or even not continue. Original, in my own real life there is also business. The new curriculum at the school advises students to create a project whose time limit is one semester (about six months) and as a project I choose to make a novel {Prayer I managed} . So, instead of writing this novel, I will focus more on that project. Also, lately I've been interested in the Touhou Project and have started to get lazy watching anime.
So I say "Thank you so much" to those of you who have followed you here.
^^^~Astu kawicusana kang amijaya^^^
^^^~Vivere militare est^^^
^^^~Adios^^^